Written In Stone *a haiku chain* ~Awarded by Sasha~
I press eyes skyward content with the break of day thoughts rain down on me. I see their eyes gleam innocense beyond their years and I wonder too. If they ever wished if Daddy could just hold them and...
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Wonderful haikus BB one of my favourite forms. Love this beginning I press eyes skyward content with the break of day thoughts rain down on me.
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A nicely written chain, and the opening does stand out, the others form an effect of a great poem in total. A fine read! Jesse
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That someday those eyes will understand that Daddy never stopped loving. ~ oh wow, this is heartbreaking, Steve.... but there is so much beauty in this pour of pain deeply moving poetry, dear one Sash...
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Maggie... Jesse... Sasha... first of all, thank you all for leaving your words of response to this piece; a bit of a story, my ever growing, never ending story, so it seems... and, it has progressed...
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~ dear Steve, I have come back to read this Haiku chain a few times, now... and this time I just had to come back and leave you a little something special... an impressive piece of poetry, my...
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